Thanks sweetie

to make the most out of it, You could just say they're stars (gas balls) rather than planets. As nearly everyone said, it's not that bad for a first. Your name "is" huuge xD and you can see the stars on the top through the planet. The star field could use some work (maybe begin with "broken's method?" and work your way up from there?) and the nebula needs much more detail. (a simple "clouds" won't do, texture texture texture xD)

hope that helped a lil, i'm off too sleeeep

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Looks hot for your first, the planet at the bottom looks a bit off, but the other one looks great!

I'd remove the bottom planet and try giving the other one some texture. Also make it stand out some more by removing the clouds/nebula that overlaps with the planet. Most of the time planets covered in nebula's don't turn out that well, if you want to cover it I'd recommend just a small part of it, like the bottom left.

The stars look nice for your first try as well, way better than my first try to be honest. The coloring is also nicely done, but I would also color the top left as the white doesn't really fit with the rest.

It looks great Kirsty, you should keep it up, make two more and you will see yourself improve in no time

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Ok thanks for the tips hun!

Goodnight

<3 spanking you nickers, ill try that on my next one

The stars near the top are in front of the planet - wondering if that was intentional or not..
Also, the top left corner looks really gray compared to the rest.
Defining the planets' edges may also help a bit.
Still, lovely coloring and overall execution. Good work!

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Yeah it was supposed to be like that, lol.

Thanks hun

Good stuff for a first start, planets could be a bit more detailed?

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Yeah im still trying to work on that in my other pieces, heh.. thanks hun